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(yeah I think the title sucks too, lack of imagination here)

not hdr

400d kit lens ( 18-55 )


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:iconinafinus:
I'm loving this. Alot. The whole scene has a very cinematic and kind of epic feel about it. Cop pulls up and tells damned kids to stop being rebellious and riding their damn cycles! The sepia adds a lot to that feel. The composition and lighting is just spot on!

Although, I feel some of the details on the bicyclers is lost a little with it being a bit too dark maybe. But that also adds to the stylised effect. Maybe a little bit of a wider view of the whole scene, or perhaps even a wide panorama if you really wanted to go 100% for the cinematic effect!

Overall though, really nice shot buddy! Defo my favourite of yours :D
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:iconelgarbo:
A grand idea, and visually stunning.

The biggest suggestion I would make to improve this shot lies in the composition. The over the shoulder shot of the policeman looking towards the kids is fantastic and inspired. This really should be the central focus, however unfortunately there's a great big glob of featureless sky dominating the top third of the photo... and unfortunately part of the cop's foot has been chopped out.

Beyond that, however, this really is quite fantastic. The angle offers a unique perspective and thrusts the viewer right into the situation. The post processing is also very good, and the sepia tone adds a nice touch. A re-crop would have this shot up there amongst the best.
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:iconmaxe06:
great :)

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np ;)

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:iconnight-delight:
GTA finnland ^^

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"There may be a great fire in our soul, yet no one ever comes to warm himself at it, and the passers-by see only a wisp of smoke."

Vincent van Gogh
:iconpatual:
=P police car is from 70's america i think though :P
:iconnight-delight:
great foto, you are the police-man guy with the shotgun, right? :yum:

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"There may be a great fire in our soul, yet no one ever comes to warm himself at it, and the passers-by see only a wisp of smoke."

Vincent van Gogh
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:P I'm the one behind camera :--D
:iconvenicequeenf:
Great, nice contrasts

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